#59 E16-A "Paul" - Japan - Done

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#59 E16-A "Paul" - Japan - Done Aug 3, 2024 8:54:18 GMT

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Post by weedsrock2 on Aug 3, 2024 8:54:18 GMT

Aug 3, 2024 5:54:33 GMT gaz01 said:

My bad but the sentence you moved should have been to after the words older type.

...increased speed over the older type and the aircraft was also equipped...

I should have spotted that first time, so your not going back and forth!

I did a little more editing. How does it look now?

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weedsrock2 Administrator Posts: 5,186	#59 E16-A "Paul" - Japan - Done Aug 6, 2024 6:30:39 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by weedsrock2 on Aug 6, 2024 6:30:39 GMT Thank you! Locked and loaded
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#59 E16-A "Paul" - Japan - Done

Post by weedsrock2 on Aug 3, 2024 8:54:18 GMT

Post by gaz01 on Aug 3, 2024 10:21:41 GMT

Post by weedsrock2 on Aug 6, 2024 6:30:39 GMT

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