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weedsrock2 Administrator Posts: 5,184	#S14 IMAM Ro.43 Done Jul 28, 2024 20:25:00 GMT Theaetetus likes this Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by weedsrock2 on Jul 28, 2024 20:25:00 GMT Please review carefully. ]
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flakstruk Deck E developer Posts: 9,661	#S14 IMAM Ro.43 Done Jul 28, 2024 21:19:06 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by flakstruk on Jul 28, 2024 21:19:06 GMT Looks ok

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#S14 IMAM Ro.43 Done Jul 29, 2024 13:15:19 GMT via mobile

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"The Ro. 43 was assigned to catapult equipped cruisers and battleships and was used to spot..."

"Ro. 43 aircraft were assigned to catapult equipped cruisers and battleships and were used to spot..."
(making the verbs agree)

Also, should Re.2000 be Re. 2000 (with the extra space?)

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#S14 IMAM Ro.43 Done Jul 29, 2024 21:44:20 GMT Theaetetus likes this

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Jul 29, 2024 13:15:19 GMT Theaetetus said:

"The Ro. 43 was assigned to catapult equipped cruisers and battleships and was used to spot..."

"Ro. 43 aircraft were assigned to catapult equipped cruisers and battleships and were used to spot..."
(making the verbs agree)

Also, should Re.2000 be Re. 2000 (with the extra space?)

Edit made. Thank you!

I looked that up when I was writing it too. All the references I found in my books and on the internet did not have a space.

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weedsrock2 Administrator Posts: 5,184	#S14 IMAM Ro.43 Done Jul 30, 2024 4:26:14 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by weedsrock2 on Jul 30, 2024 4:26:14 GMT Bump
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gaz01 Forumini Lieutenant Posts: 649	#S14 IMAM Ro.43 Done Jul 30, 2024 20:51:06 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by gaz01 on Jul 30, 2024 20:51:06 GMT I always think IMAM is Romanian or something. Decent filler though.
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raevski Administrator Cooking with gas Posts: 1,605	#S14 IMAM Ro.43 Done Jul 31, 2024 4:59:48 GMT via mobile Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by raevski on Jul 31, 2024 4:59:48 GMT Jul 30, 2024 20:51:06 GMT gaz01 said: I always think IMAM is Romanian or something. Decent filler though. Not Romanian from my memory. Could be thinking of IAR

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#S14 IMAM Ro.43 Done Jul 31, 2024 10:02:17 GMT

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Post by gaz01 on Jul 31, 2024 10:02:17 GMT

Jul 31, 2024 4:59:48 GMT raevski said:

Jul 30, 2024 20:51:06 GMT gaz01 said:

I always think IMAM is Romanian or something.

Decent filler though.

Not Romanian from my memory. Could be thinking of IAR

Oh yeah, they are pretty similar.

"That's right son, join the navy. Get behind a bloody big gun and knock the hell out of somebody"

"We went out, got our arses kicked, then came back again"

weedsrock2 Administrator Posts: 5,184	#S14 IMAM Ro.43 Done Aug 1, 2024 0:37:11 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by weedsrock2 on Aug 1, 2024 0:37:11 GMT Thanks guys! Locked and loaded
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mnnorthstars Deck E developer Posts: 9,319	#S14 IMAM Ro.43 Done Aug 1, 2024 14:27:07 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by mnnorthstars on Aug 1, 2024 14:27:07 GMT Hyphenate “catapult-capable” In the third sentence is there a space between Ro. and 43? Hyphenate “catapult-equipped” Hyphenate “catapult-launched”
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#S14 IMAM Ro.43 Done Aug 1, 2024 23:35:40 GMT

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Aug 1, 2024 14:27:07 GMT mnnorthstars said:

Hyphenate “catapult-capable”
In the third sentence is there a space between Ro. and 43?
Hyphenate “catapult-equipped”
Hyphenate “catapult-launched”

All good catches!

However, you missed that Mediterranean was misspelled.

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#S14 IMAM Ro.43 Done

Post by weedsrock2 on Jul 28, 2024 20:25:00 GMT

Post by flakstruk on Jul 28, 2024 21:19:06 GMT

Post by Theaetetus on Jul 29, 2024 13:15:19 GMT

Post by weedsrock2 on Jul 29, 2024 21:44:20 GMT

Post by weedsrock2 on Jul 30, 2024 4:26:14 GMT

Post by gaz01 on Jul 30, 2024 20:51:06 GMT

Post by raevski on Jul 31, 2024 4:59:48 GMT

Post by gaz01 on Jul 31, 2024 10:02:17 GMT

Post by weedsrock2 on Aug 1, 2024 0:37:11 GMT

Post by mnnorthstars on Aug 1, 2024 14:27:07 GMT

Post by weedsrock2 on Aug 1, 2024 23:35:40 GMT

Post by mnnorthstars on Aug 2, 2024 2:27:51 GMT

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