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#69 Chacabuco - Chile - Done

Theaetetus Forumini Rear Admiral Posts: 4,902	#69 Chacabuco - Chile - Done Jul 24, 2024 1:39:20 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Theaetetus on Jul 24, 2024 1:39:20 GMT Minor note, but there is an extra space before the first sentence, and the first full stop should be a comma.
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TrickiVic Forumini Lieutenant Posts: 719	#69 Chacabuco - Chile - Done Jul 24, 2024 2:18:32 GMT via mobile Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by TrickiVic on Jul 24, 2024 2:18:32 GMT Looks good
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flakstruk Deck E developer Posts: 9,695	#69 Chacabuco - Chile - Done Jul 24, 2024 2:29:35 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by flakstruk on Jul 24, 2024 2:29:35 GMT Jul 24, 2024 1:39:20 GMT Theaetetus said: Minor note, but there is an extra space before the first sentence, and the first full stop should be a comma. Thanks for the reviews mate

weedsrock2 Administrator Posts: 5,186	#69 Chacabuco - Chile - Done Jul 24, 2024 3:31:11 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by weedsrock2 on Jul 24, 2024 3:31:11 GMT Jul 24, 2024 1:39:20 GMT Theaetetus said: Minor note, but there is an extra space before the first sentence, and the first full stop should be a comma. Good catches. Thanks!
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weedsrock2 Administrator Posts: 5,186	#69 Chacabuco - Chile - Done Jul 28, 2024 2:29:16 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by weedsrock2 on Jul 28, 2024 2:29:16 GMT Locked and loaded
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